The graphic design is really impressive.
The controls take a lot of time getting used to. To maybe fix this, I think you shouldn’t be able to fail a package, because my first few deliveries were totally wrong and by the time I realized how the game works and how to control it there were a lot of extra rules and the time was short.
But overall, after a while I started really enjoying it!
(Also you basically made Emacs: The Game if you know what that is lol)