100%'d in one sitting, which took about three, maybe four hours. This is extremely well-made. The art perfectly matches the tone, and the writing (particularly the characterization; everyone seems very distinct) feels polished. The PoV character is adorable, Puzzles is cute, and the supporting cast is charming and utilized well.
Honestly, there's a good chance I'd recommend this to romance enjoyers entirely unfamiliar with the source material. This is GOTY to me. I ship your yumeship now.
EDIT: Upon a second pass (reading aloud with friends), I do actually have a couple quibbles. While the internal narration is almost entirely in second person ("you"), there are a few moments where it's suddenly first person ("I") and it's quite jarring every time. Also, I believe the "voice volume" setting may be bugged? No matter where I set the slider to, there aren't any voicelines, with the sole exception of the bad ending's cutscene, which is fully voiced even with that slider set to mute. I'd say these are just small technical faults in an otherwise Very Good VN, though. It's nothing a patch can't fix.
