I agree with the other comments on the pace, but I'll say the art is pretty nice, very coherent. Best part by far is the little interactions with your coworkers and the humor.
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I just playtested it myself and once you find everything you can do, in order to win you basically just have to do your jobs and talk to your boss and nothing else for like 5 days. I could've added it so you can end the day earlier, but I think the idea I had in mind was just to ambitious for a 4-day jam lol.