Played through it!
(SPOILERS for people that wanna play it)
While at first, the wording stood out, letting myself immerse in the story made me see that the writing and story felt deeply personal. On some level, it felt like both Lucio and Jeremiah were made from the same perspective, like Jeremiah was Lucio's conscience (even if that's not what happened in the story)
I also liked how in the evil path, you had to click for every single axe strike, it made the act of murder much more weighty and impactful