Thank you so much for playing! Sorry we took so long to write back, haha... it makes us happy to know that Letty's themes resonated so clearly, so strongly. And I'm glad that scene with "Friend" stood out to you so much! It's one of the ones we're proud of, I think.
Blanche's POV was the most important thing for us to get right. The two of them are very "interior." Blanche had been hard for Scarlet to read throughout, and switching to her POV changes that for the reader. Meanwhile, Scarlet is easily understood, but becomes something strange the moment we can't read her mind...
I feel the same way about those messier parts near the end. For the Jam release, we're happy-enough with them, but it's one of the things at the front of our mind for a "1.1" definitive version.
~Pendulumgraph
thank you so much for playing letty! i'm glad you enjoyed it! the scene toward the end with letty's friend was very important, showing how disposable you are for your differences, how there is an invisible line in behavior that when crossed will have you thrown out like garbage. letty's friend holds a lot of power over her and i'm glad that was visible.
pendulumgraph wrote that scene and i am very grateful to it for that, i think it added a lot to the vn as a whole. their oppressions are an integral part in why the story happens the way that it does, and so i felt we had to do them justice.
another editing pass is planned once judging is concluded, currently we're working on other projects but expect a version 1.1 sometime then ^w^
~plushie