I don't necessarily want to discourage you from continuing it. Heck, I feel discouraged at times about my own stuff when there's not enough attention, or things don't pan out. Criticism can help you improve, but it depends on how you want to take it, though. After all, writing is a hard art many people have to hone consistently.
its ok, nd yes it can help me improve and possibly will, with other projects i have other ideas , this was just " i have a wild idea for a comedy murder mysery " no harm done and i thank you for taking the time to even download this and try it let alone give a review. Maybe ill return to it at a later date. I have other ideas for games that i hope will be better. And again thank you for giving any type of feedback.