I enjoyed the story, it was short and sweet! The main character is unfortunately pretty relatable for me and I suspect to a lot of people. Ash is cute and I would love to get to know them more.
My big piece of feedback is that the colors for the characters' names above their dialogue boxes are kind of jarring and hard to read on certain backgrounds (especially the unnamed man's bright red and the nurse's bright green, which pop but don't match up to the colors of the rest of the game and feel harsh)