There are spoilers in here! Look away, not-yet-player!
Chapter 4:
Aw, the cover art on this one looks so sad. 😔
I absolutely read "Rachel Meadow" as "Rachel Maddow" at first and thought, wow, the people in this story keep getting more famous(!!).
You know, I never thought about it until reading this just how much worse it would be to be in an abusive relationship with someone who is a remote worker. At least when they leave for work, you have some time to yourself, time to plan to get away, time to think. Poor Rachel.
The wraith has a cool look to him, too. I like your demon visual descriptions.
Awww, Flea's a vegetarian - maybe even a vegan? That's so cute.
Yay! Flea's true form! I've been wanting to "see" it.
Well. The lesson I've learned here is to never try to work things out with family. heh.
This is my favourite chapter thus far, though!
Favourite lines:
"I'm his partner. The brains of the operation, really."
and
Not a "line" but... Ted is literally me. Wait, is he literally me? I choose to believe he is.