Just finished reading both Jerry and Parker’s POVs, and all I have to say is just- Wowie!! I really enjoyed both sides! To me, both characters were really likable! And I swear I’m not glazing when I say this; I enjoyed every interaction among them!
Although I did come across one problem-
SPOILER BELOW! During Parker’s POV, his sprite would often cover some of the dialogue, making it harder to read what he is saying when the text intersects with his hand; it honestly disrupted the flow of my reading, trying to figure out what he says after, it could also disrupt a newbie’s first read of Parker’s POV if they had not read Jerry’s POV first. It’s quite troublesome, honestly..
But overall, no other problem has occurred besides that.
Here’s an example of what I mean:
It’s way worse on later dialogue during the Baseball try-outs though…
Really loved the VN, though! Can’t wait for update 1B. I’m def hooked.
EDIT: I forgot to mention that the game had closed on me after having reconnected my controller. I dunno if it solely happened to me or if it’s an actual bug… But I just wanted to let that out there, in case it’s an actual serious bug. Didn’t happen again though. Might’ve clicked something that completely closed the VN, but it did put me ALL the way back for some fuck-ass reason, couldn’t even skip dialogue that I’ve already read, which was weird.