Before I comment this, please don't take this as accusatory or outright hateful, I do not mean that in the slightest. This visual novel was written with AI, specifically ChatGPT. All of it isn't, I could tell that much, but there were moments that gave it away. The constant grouping of threes, the "its not x, its y" wording used frequently, the tell-don't-show with the explanation from Zeke (I know it's a visual novel thats not supposed to show you every part of the story, but it just REEKED of those AI dumbing-it-down explanations), and so on.
The more I noticed, the more the story started to change as well; instead of it being this mystery about our lover who's kind of bad-shit crazy and us slowly regaining our memory, It turned super left field with monsters and the fact Khol could be knocked out that easily despite us being told we SHOULD fear this guy?? I know this demo has a lot of work to do, and I do love this game-- the art is fantastic and the story definitely had an amazing hook, I just hope that if the creator was using AI, they would stop or at least be more honest to their audience.
