setup and atmosphere here are killer and i loved how fran was characterized... i feel like extremely hotheaded characters are pretty rare in this space? the alt future (?) setting was interesting and i liked how sparse you kept the details, just enough to make the plot beats make sense.
medfet stuff was very hot :) all of the characters were too, i think the sprite work was fantastic
and, reading your postmortem, wow! with the music! another feather in your atmospheric cap because you nailed it for these characters, this setting, this mysterious and dangerous world...
this felt like it could have been from some episode of the x files i missed... very much looking forward to your next work, i loved this a lot