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Kinda old player here,  realized my comment was way to big, so here is the link of an online text i wrote about the current version. I would be grateful if the dev could read it!
https://www.droptext.app/ent55jf9

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Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a detailed review!

To explain Orchid, I didn't have enough time to flesh out his story fully, and telling the story indirectly through the environment takes less time—so I ended up killing him off early on.

As for the Broker, she isn't dead yet. I plan to explore her character in much greater detail in the main game.

I'm also aware that the overall pacing of the story feels a bit rushed right now, so I definitely plan to improve how the narrative is delivered.

Thank you so much for caring this deeply about the game's story, and I hope you stay tuned for future updates

Sorry i got very emotionally invested during my review... because i really liked Orchid, i thought the cute arstyle benefitted him a bunch, but i understand your vision now!
Thank you a lot for reading my review!
Both times i played your game it got me so inspired, i was exploring every map and image from the source because i genuinely think your worldbuilding is amazing, that's also why every story character means so much for me, i love to see the direction you are going for, and the game right now feels so much bigger than before, that is awesome!