I had a good time reading this, and I love the art in it. But god the story really got to me. As soon as I read the warning about religious trauma I had a feeling it was gonna destroy me and, lo and behold, it did lol (compliment).
The way that Pam and Luce interact with each other is also something I find really interesting. Luce doesn't really stand up for herself and you can even see this with how Pam kinda takes advantage of that, especially near the end. Meanwhile, Pam is very stubborn and assertive, girl knows what she wants, and she will fight for it. I can totally see why Pam gets a bit frustrated with Luce, given how she isn't confident in her relationship with Pam (even though it's kinda messy) and definitely wants to be very discrete about it. Like that scene with them outside and Pam wanting to hold Luce's hand. They're so different in how they express and feel about relationships that together it makes for a weird and kinda messy dynamic.
Also, I just want to say I think the CG with Luce on the bed after she slept with Pam has to be my favorite piece of art in the game. It's like I can feel the pure dread and regret and add in with the text surrounding that scene and, yeah absolutely gut-wrenching (compliment)
But, yeah, putting aside all of my ramblings, this was great, and I really do find Pam and Luce very interesting characters. Good stuff here!!