Really good art as usual with you. It's very straightforward and easy to grasp which I also like. The text is short and quick but just enough to get a good description of the events occurring. Figuring out the key abilities is easy and a fun little tactic in figuring it out. The tentacle pit caught me off-guard and is a nice addition
My real only complaint is the quick-time events sometimes end right when it's still on the red bar, which isn't that frustrating considering the nice bad ends. Sometimes the text gets a little too cozy with the border, but also not a big deal.
My favorite character is the succubus and her ability to coat Drya in her out suit is really fun to watch take effect on Dyra's body. I especially like the description of the suit oozing as she goes in for a hug. This is my bias of course, but my favorite.
Nice work!