great story, seen a similar story and honestly thought it was going that way so i was on the edge of my seat since stage 3 but it didnt end nearly the same way, still great story, as others said it could use more scrollability and re-readability the only thing id change if its possible is add more endings to give us a reason to replay it a few times, like the current ending then maybe like an ending where she realizes she doesnt have to be that big cause he sees her for what she is and she goes back to normal or the swimmer phase, or an ending where she realizes there could be technicalities where since this isnt the real her it could become an unstable reality and she could lose control of what phase shes in or if the machines gets damaged or breaks shed get stuck so she goes back to normal in fear of something bad happening, or an ending where she doesnt want to go back but he doesnt exactly like her being so huge due to insecurities or something so instead of going back she has him do it too, then maybe an ending where she realizes being that big has a few qol issues so she goes back to stage 3 so shes still huge but can operate like a perfectly normal person, or even an ending where he eggs her on to got to a farther stage where shes even bigger- i think you get the point, just multiple endings for multiple experiences and replayability and interactivity, spice up the game a little if you know what i mean, again if thats possible if not then i guess thats just a cool concept for if you put the game somewhere else