Being hard on myself makes me stronger and better.š
I understand everything you mean and those things have a point even for me (I am extremely stubborn), but I donāt wanna change visual styleš Nevertheless, Iāll make it easier to read by limiting the design to two fonts per page as a compromise between the āIām an artist, this is my visionā mindset and reader comfort. Iām not ready to give up on my vision just yet, haha.
As for the feedback from other designers: like you, they pointed out readability issues caused by the text layout and the number of fonts used (six in total across the document). However, I hadnāt paid much attention to that, since they tend to favor a clear, orderly structure and dislike chaos in any form - even the creative kind.
I hope, I will upload 0-patieā¦ 0Duality ASAP and it will help to get the whole system phylosophy and message I sought to convey including through the layout and fontsš
Anyway, here are my last 90% of work on the game!