Heya, thanks for the feedback. I'd have gotten to this way sooner but life's been kinda wild in and out of hospital BUT ENOUGH MOPING.
So, you kinda hit the nail on the head. Its only really based on the tale of the Dragon of Palma in the sense that used the name, and its a Dragon and he was a bit of a dick, everything else is my own mind.
Presentation, yeah. We planned for more sprites, we planned for CG's, we planned for the moon and missed the mark. Essentially me and my artist had a lot of obligations in may. They had exams, and I had work and family matters, and we both had Confuzzled.
I'll admit that I am VERY new to writing romance, and even sex (Outside of a fetish capacity.) We did plan originally to have CG's for the sex, but again, god laughed at those plans apparently.
Thank you for playing, and leaving the comment. It is deeply appreciated.