this was super cool!!! i find Louisa intensely relatable, particularly in the moment where Wulfwynn challenges her to just walk out, noting that she's perfectly capable of sustaining herself without being tied to a man, and Louisa shuts this line of thought down because she is certain that no matter what, her father will close off all exits to her... being ruled by that fear of a heartless man's power (founded or unfounded) is a brutal experience, and i think you perfectly captured it.
this was beautiful, fascinating, and just plain satisfying. well done!!!