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A very difficult read, even for someone who can normally handle disturbing themes just fine, but I’m glad I finished it because of how good it was ! I especially love the writing style, I think you did a great job conveying the horror of what the two went through by describing it from the perception of a naive child. It hurts to read, but damn it was effective.

Also, I don’t know if this was intended or not, but the fact Ari and Indi are the only two characters whose face can be seen is a nice touch.

I would absolutely recommend this VN to anyone who can handle themes like this !

thank you so much for the words :) (and for the fanart!!!! i keep looking at it, i think they look so great in your style. have you posted it anywhere so i can repost it on bluesky and yell about it). i honestly didn't realize how tough this might be for people, so im happy that you wanted to push through it. i haven't made it to lonely dog yet, but slugshake played it (and was too nervous to leave a comment >:[) and said it was phenomenal. thank you for checking the VN out :) -lav

I'm really glad you liked the fanart <3 I haven't posted it anywhere yet but could if you wanted to ! Just lmk which account to tag ^^ And you're totally free to repost it on your own platforms btw ! I don't use any socials with an algorithm anymore so totally okay with any gift art I make being reposted as long as I'm credited in some way :3 

I suppose this is kinda inevitable when dealing with disturbing themes haha, but I'm always in support of pushing taboo in art. ANd I think it was done very well here !

Slugshake actually left a comment on my VN's page btw, I just haven't responded to any of them yet since being complimented on my work like this makes me a bit nervous TwT it meant a lot tho !