Really fun use of an unreliable narrator! It's a little rough in the beginning when it slammed me with a large number of characters, but once it got going it was cool how the mystery narrative developed.
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Really enjoyed the way it dropped hints at the plurality reveal. The way Polly was done was awesome (being a child, but into games that sound a little suspicious for a child to be into, but also there's a real child in the game). Luci was really interesting as well because at first the way they (forgot pronouns sorry) would just randomly appear in scenes felt like bad writing, but then the "bad writing" ended up being the biggest hint that multiple characters in the cast are sharing the same brainspace. Anyway, nice work.