I have to give you like a million props for including an in depth screening test with detailed illustrations. you are actually potentially saving lives out here w your vn and i applaud you.
AMAZING ARTWORK and the entire feel of the vn from artwork to UI is so melancholic and beautiful. poignant story, collage work is incredibly done and the writing really helps put me into the mindset of the mc and understand the pain. I wasn't aware of the pain that EDS can inflict until reading through this vn, but you did an outstanding job of writing how it feels.