I have to admit, I saw the link, got the itch.io external link warning, and panicked a bit. I had no idea you were actually trying to help. :)
The funny part is that I asked you to remove it before I even downloaded the file, so now I don’t have your notes. Great move by me.
About “Good morning. Olga.”, I get what you mean. It’s meant to sound a little dry and abrupt because that’s kind of her vibe, but I’ll take another look at it.
Now that I know what your intentions were, feel free to paste the link again if you want. Or you can just paste the most important notes here in the comments.
And huge thanks for reminding me about the About section. I honestly don’t know how I managed to overlook it.
Sorry again for the confusion, and thanks for taking the time to go through the script. I really appreciate it.