i'm hesitant to comment since i only reached one ending thus far but:
i really really liked this! the animations get you revved up for the next chapter, and Laura being visually represented by her eyes looked cool as hell, and also i think she's kinda awesome and relatableeeee *twists a lock of hair around my finger*
i'm excited to come back to this and check out the other endings. i thought the "fill in the blank" choices were interesting to subject the player to, and also hell yeah author notes. i crammed a lot of author notes of a kind into my game and i think it's cool to get a look behind the curtain (+ to get to see the various influences)
well done!!!