I hope you go back and finish up Act 2 and 3, I really want to read the ending since the story really started picking up by the end of this demo!
This game is beauttiifullll and the art is amazing. Really love the character sprites and backgrounds and the UI is godly
I did notice a few issues with textboxes and buttons: the menus for selecting choices in particular seem to only change color for the hovers when you hover somewhat below the actual box you're supposed to click (sorry if that doesn't make sense >.<) but that could just be my system. I think also clicking on the text box itself to progress dialogue instead of outside the textbox would work nicely. I think you could also benefit from a proofread, since there's quite a few confusing grammatical errors and misspells. If you need a playtester and proofreader please hmu, I really really enjoyed what you submitted and the full game pdf + the setting paragraph in the description seem REALLY INTERESTING!!