Dear Suas,
The Donathan Daane entry should show up like this. We have checked the file uploaded on the itch page. It is very likely that the file you downloaded got corrupted during the download process. To fix it please try to download the game again.
As for Clerk’s three CG scenes, it is related to the choices picked during his quest when he asks you questions. You can try reloading an earlier save to see the difference route. Based on your screenshot, I suggest picking choices that seem more confident or dominant.
Let me know if you still encounter any issues!
