I've loved selfcest since I was a wee thing. This feeling of loving, loathing, longing for yourself - a you that is not quite you yet fully you. I think this story explored all of that and more in a really heart-grabbing way. I empathized a lot with Erin, and just as I really wanted to give her a hug, the final scene happened. It's easy to see how much sincerity was poured into every word !
As the tiniest of asides, sometimes the prose exited the window in NVL mode and I couldn't quite grasp some sentences (blame it on my bad ESL, perhaps). I think tweaking it ever so slightly so the entirety of the text can be read in its full glory would do justice to it !!
Thank you for the ride, congratulations on your first VN and may we get to read a lot more from you from now on ~