All in all, I have greatly enjoyed playing the demo. Despite its shortness, I got a good impression from it and I am excited to try more of the game.
There were several bugs that I stumbled upon during the gameplay. For example, at the end, Votey suddenly ran through a wall and was not seen any more. Maybe it is meant to happen like that, but if not, I hope you manage to fix it before the release of the full game.
Besides, I have seen several typos and grammar mistakes during the demo. While I haven't noticed too many of them and it wasn't an issue for me, their fix will certainly polish up your dialogue.
What impressed me most about the game is voice acting. I honestly think that it was the best part of the game, the acting was lovely and it brought characters life.
Moreover, it was nice for me to see some names I recognised.
I have thoroughly enjoyed the demo and I am waiting for the full version of the game. I love indie games and I am excited to see how it will progress. Good luck in development!