Very eye-catching visuals! The piano throughout was nice as well.
The sprites spinning onto the screen was cute, but felt a bit distracting and out of place from the tone of the story.
I really liked the scenario! I think it's an interesting take on the concept of non-con!
Spoilers ahead:
I'm interpreting Saffron before and after the memory wipe as two different people for this take;
Sage being made to do all that was not exactly consensal, and having the twist at the end made it downright terrifying to imagine the fallout she would go through.
Saffron post-wipe feels like an omelas child for pre-wipe Saffron. And she /is/ pre-wipe saffron. and she isn't. Very fun to dwell on.
You posed some interesting questions about what one's "self" really is.
I loved the lines about convoluted half-truths.