This is funny! I've smiled or laughed way more times than I expected going into this.
It's interesting to see peoples' strengths manifest in the games they make. A game made by a lone sound designer will probably be a closed room where all of the action is happening right on the other side of the door; from a lone composer, probably a great soundtrack to hear while the player wanders along a simple but suitable setting; and yours, by an obvious writer, is an exuberant story following a lot of *very different* characters thrown into a tense situation with some thick world-building. I think this is good and enjoyable work - it's also the only VN I've played/read/experienced. For whatever it's worth, I think it does a great job of entertaining.
Also, it seems you really committed with those socks lol. At first it was just the one sock, and I was ready for that - but then there was another -- makes sense -- and then we were onto the 6th sock... if what happened to these socks is non-reversible, hopefully someone will be around to appreciate your walks from bed to the coffee machine in the mornings, now that the jam has concluded.
Nice work, and all the best!