Hmm… How can I fairly rate this story when the objective target is almost an antithesis to me? Don’t misunderstand me, I can see why someone could enjoy this story. It has its fun points, and—I guess— that dad bod is a thirsted body type. I won’t talk about the morality of fucking your ex’s dad, anyone of us would like a 101 moral class now.
As I said before, this story is not for me, but that doesn't mean that the plot is bad by itself, it doesn't drag more than it should and doesn't try to be more than it is, a horny story about fucking DILF.
It has some silly moments that actually made me chuckle, and the management of the sprites shows an understanding of composition for narrations. The music was a nice addition, not too overboard but not repetitive either, and the BG, despite some details here and there, correctly synthesized the situation and locations.
The characters, however, flopped a little bit; they feel more like tools to make the ending happen rather than actual people reacting to the situations they are in. Most of them are one-note or moldable characters that say whatever is required at the moment. I recognize the effort to make them slightly different, like the lazy one, the silly one, or the flirty one, but it really doesn't matter if they act according to the plot requirements.
I think the most obvious of this is Harvey. We have this guy, whom the plot established that the protagonist has to fuck, being weirdly open with his sexuality, using a more than revealing outfit, and jumping at the first chance to shower with him because ‘it was the only one with hot water’ —I’m paraphrasing, I’m sorry if that wasn’t the actual excuse—. If at one moment, they needed to sleep together because ‘there is only one bed’ I wouldn’t bat an eye at that moment.
This story is not for me, but that’s not something bad, you can’t please everybody, so do your best to please those who you can —I swear to God, if someone sees an innuendo there, I’ll skin everybody alive— I see the potential, and your other stories also have something worth telling for what I’ve seen of them!