livestreaming has to be made illegal.
very exciting demo, I feel like the intro (and general overbearingness of edens inner monologue) drags but i really love the flow of the game as it goes on. sierra and jun are so goddamn cute. the contrast between biscottis "ditzy spiral" persona and her attempts and failure to do that same routine irl is so good. the forum and stream shit is sickening, i love it. showing highlights of these streams (and how each fanbase edits them differently) is very fun. i love the obs windows being as much of a solid lived-in space as the places these 3 live and work. hope to see more.
Mae, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment! The structure has been a tough balancing act since this is my first prose work, the narrative rhythm is just entirely different to comics, its actually very reassuring to hear someone notice the 'flow' at all (positive & negative) since it is very important to me. Cheers!