There's individual aspects here that works in my view. The presentation's on the simpler side but uses the jam sprites creatively by adding to, taking parts, or applying engine functions like zoom to support the storytelling. The writing also gets the work done, and the horror was rather effective.
Where I feel it falters is trying to be so many different things - we get horror for a bit, relationship drama, kink comedy and kink smut. With all of these different directions, they all end up too anemic. The horror kinda just cuts off, the stakes of the relationship drama was practically nothing, the comedy got lost, and the sex scenes were just too brief. To tell on myself, I am somewhat the target demographic (unlike most other commenters) so I say: there should have been more freaky sex! I got like 5 lines of being micro! Or if not that, there was opportunity to lean more into the absurdism of stuff like "he got turned into a cock and he let me fuck him". How does that even work, the people want to know; show OR tell pls 😭
In summary, I liked it but gently encouraging to get freakier 😜