really, really beautiful presentation & delivery. this hit close to home. i wouldn't change a single word.
(edited with further thoughts from the jam chat server): hole* was so good. so fucking good. the legendary 10 minute VN!! i love short, impactful writing, so this just blew me out of the water. i've never read a piece of writing that took physical sexual dysfunction seriously, and in such a beautifully articulated manner. the writing, the visual presentation, it's all in harmony and it only could've been told this way through VN format... ugh what a good game