Here we have the game with the best dialog writing. You really wanna be part of the group.
But, dear Zoey, please step back for a moment and redo all. the. scenes. Best with the same effort and easyiness you do in dialog, but at least try a fraction of it. Only one motion used for both characters: no. Linear motion: no. Only one render (albeit from different angles): no. Male genital without texture, realistic size and fit: no. And that should really be the minimum.
You got better with the tools, one can clearly see. Make that one push of the scene quality before you finish the game. You will be rewarded for it I'm sure and maybe invest in another push after that. Make all the beautiful girls shine like they should and deserve, please.