it's kinda sad that the music's groovy on the gameplay phase like.. idk what I'm doing, what I'm supposed to do and stuff, the intro with dialogues's good in itself, there's a lore (a great quality in itself and it's definetly the part where most of the efforts was put) and I really like the main menu theme, I just sit and listened to it (even if I guess that's some .. royalty free music ? ), maybe it would work better if you make a windows version of the thing, on web it bug really by right clicking or something.
Otherwise I think it would be a good idea to mention controls in game, I checked the page and I had an understand of how I'm supposed to control only basing on the base of the fourth pic of this page, but great job none the less.