Hi!
Tried your game and I'll give you my humble opinion:
Nice story and very tipical rpg maker game scenario, some plugins and practice on the mapping are gonna make your game even better, watch out for some tilesets you are not supposed to go trough! (used to do the same mistake)
I can see your passion for what you are doing so my best advice to you is keep making games and they are gonna be one better then the other.
thank you for sharing your game with the community. and with me personally!
_UndersoulVGstudio