Loved this game!
I got 2 endings (both were heartbreaking and enjoyable!). Went with Charlie (all the way) on my first playthrough, with Fawn on the second.
I love the art and characters' design: each of them feel very lively and cute. The story is intriguing even if I couldn't sniff out what was the inciting about or the opening dreams incident (something that a bit of polish / edit can fix I am sure!)
I think the story is very cool and promising and I will be on a lookout for updates!
PS
One thing I would proooooobably suggest is to avoid introducing multiple characters at once (I got lost for a second there, puzzling together who is who)