i will come back to play the full version however the fact that i start to became engaged on the story and then i became permanently lost on the cave of doom and despair broke my expectations. i will rate your game based on what i have now. however i wold like if you fixed the error mensage and the infinity cave bug. that said the writing is very charming, and that exactly what i want of a homeastuck like experience.
summarizing very thing artisticaly related is incredible but the technical aspects arent good.
maybe this review is a bit too harsh but i know that you can do better.