I'm reading this with my sister, and we're loving it so far! She cleaned hotel rooms for a while and she felt the hotel cleaning stuff was true to her experience doing the same work on the other side of the globe. We just finished the scene where we meet husk, and i loved the layering of all the pictures as the scene progressed. Your paintings are beautiful, it really makes me miss when renpy had the "hide" option for hiding the textboxes so you could just look at the art.
I read POMLY yesterday, and while the sprites you made were super cute, I think the way the internal dialogue in this story, and the way the alters are represented is a lot more compelling to me in terms of reflecting my plural experiences.