I was expecting a short yet sweet story but was not expecting the length of this vn. It’s lengthier than I expected! Much more than most on going VN I’d say.
I like that its pacing is tight, the narrative arc hits the note well, and the characterization and relationship growth between the cast felt mostly natural and not forced.
But one minor criticism from me is around Titan when they first met the rest of the cast. I feel he knows too much or feels too close to them even though they just met, unlike how he first met Erenok where he gets real professional. I know Erenok can’t stop yapping about them but I don’t feel they’d have the same connection just by the stories, he needs to earn it or get to know them first you know?
But other than that, it’s a very solid VN and worth a read. Looking forward to the continuation or other works on this universe!