Heyy it's really great demo release!! Full voice lines VN like this is very rare to find, and VA of each character is really doing a good job to voicing the characters!!
Well, maybe need some adjustments for Zephyra voice line, bcz i barely heard voice line, yeah i understand Zephyra character is gentle, soft, and calm but when music background kicks in you almost can't heard her voice line. I'm not saying it's bad, but it'll be better with some improvements. Keep the good works guys!! Looking forward for new chapter coming later!!