Soooo... I just finished Patrick and Wiliam's days. But before i go further. We, as humanity, need to see the selfie Troy sent to Steve and the reply 🤣 That being cleared, i can share my thoughts ~~
On Chris's days, i do like the fact that we take time, first being friends before thinking of something else. Plus, the topic of being alone in a new town, at an age where it is hard to make true new friends, it calls for something good later on. And let's face it, i'm a hundred percent for tiger men sooooo
On Troy's days, well i'm definitely falling for hyenas thanks to him. And it's kind of a common fantasy imo, the pretty flirty handyman, who doesn't like that ~~ But, i am eager to learn more about his family and his relations with his brothers and sisters. I'm feeling there is something deep under that (and maybe some chosen family theme, i don't know)
On Patrick's days, first i was like, that's fine but not my cup of tea. Don't have enough BGs to have an opinion. Little did i knew... The fact that they express their feelings for each other. I felt it was a bit rushed, only cause we didn't see the weeks before, but in the end, it's so lovely and cute. Especially the evening walk. I can't wait to see these two lovebirds ~~
On Will's days, it's very interesting topics. The conversation about Never Let Me Go, tide between people, friends, etc. It is quite fascinating (and I added the book to my to-read list). I like also the tone, since Will is 50; I feel it takes more time and speaks about deeper topics
And can we talk about the Diva? The Queen? Claire? Claire before everyone else 😌
And also, if one day you're thinking about translating your work into other languages. I'd gladly contribute, for free, to the French one^^
Oh wow, seriously thank you for taking the time to write this analysis- very insightful and helpful. I do plan on having a CG for the selfie eventually :D Honestly I would also like to see that come to life hehe
Ngl- I'm a huger sucker for tigers too so #twin lol. Good to know about Patrick- I was worried it was coming across too rushed because it was so... immediate. I wanted to try to have each route have a unique pace- so I'm glad it ultimately ended up working out in terms of still coming across sweet.
If you can't tell Never Let Me Go is my favorite book sooooo moar self-indulgence on my part haha.
Claire is THE diva, the one and only ;D
And thank you so much! I will def keep you in mind once I get to localization- it would be amazing to be able share the VN with non-english readers.
But again, truly thank you for your kind words and thoughts on the VN so far. <3
