There's pronoun mistake in flashback when Brahms an Olive meet(Brahms saying "her friend" no matter if you choose mc to go by they or he). I think there's also pronoun errors in "Double trouble", i played it some time ago and forgot to mention at the time. Overall i enjoyed the game as well as all the other once you made.
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Sorry about that! Thanks for telling me, I definitely should've been more careful when proofreading. I fixed the issue in this game, hopefully it's all good now? I'll have to contact my co-creator to fix the one in Double Trouble's Blossoming though so that might take a day or two. Don't hesitate to tell me if I missed anything else.