Add Adult at least for Tags. This can not be found easily otherwise.
Do not make it into just another Salvor-Deep. You want to focus on NTR? Focus on one Bull, and centralize the H-Content around that Bull.
We already have Salvor Deep, Sunken Veil and Project Hadal. No need to just make another one of them. Create a focus content in a specific direction, limit it to that. That way, you can make the game small enough to feel and play like Salvor Deep, but focus on the NTR Content aspect and plenty of scenes surrounding one Bull, and many other Girls including the girls around Dispatch, that Bull does things to.
You do not need two PoV aspects. Just keep it to Oblivious, cause you will strain content around two different Dispatch PoV styles. From Oblivious to the other one. Just pick Oblivious, it is just superior and you can do so much more with it too.
Artstyle is oddly muscular with a softness to it. Should probably rename the two girls into something else. Like Maria and Valentine, just quick names i threw out.
Take care and nice seeing someone changing things a bit!
Thanks for playing! I'll add the tag. Unfortunately though if I continue I likely wouldn't go in the suggested direction.
I just wanted to make SDeep, and I don't really wanna focus on NTR if that demands making one antagonist and filtering all the h-content through them. I like having the variety of one-off encounters lol
I also just enjoy my two PoVs and muscle. I'm glad for the feedback though.