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Really rough around the edges and sides.
The Idea is very nice actually, Kira is really interesting, has a decent and grounded development. Although the use of AI for the writing is clear, is nice to see that there is indeed some parts that have been writen by a person.

Needs much polish yet, I would suggest some rewriting of the scenes AI was used to describe things, as it made the scenes too long and artificial, most people in internet already messed with AI for a bit and can feel the artificial feeling it's writing style innately has.

The parts I didn't skip reading, most were clearly writen by a person, and it has a good feeling to it, passion. So don't be afraid of writing, yourself, something that feels rough, you will improve with time, it's a nice growth to see and is real. Like how Eli/Ellie felt regret and Kira accepted their regret, asking just to not lie again.

The gameplay... well, as of now (Public v0.0.3), there's none yet, things only progress when you do what is said you should do. Right now is more of a Visual Novel with one branching.

It's nice to see that someone is able to use AI to make a game when they know little about coding or making a game, but try to do some parts manually so you develop skills.

To summary it up:
 The game shows passion on the making  of it, still is really rough, has a bunch of room for growth, could use some conmas, has little game'play', the story is the focus for now.

It may be a really nice game as it get's developed, keep the good work and good luck with making your story real.