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ah-- something more,, though it isn't a bug report. in some cases, the general text seems, at times, non-applicable? especially during V's route. during his route, 

- V warns that the cops might go after him if he doesn't report Ronin. MC is worried. in the notes page after, you are forced to choose "This is gonna be fun."

- Ronin will threaten you to tell him the truth about your identity; even if you've already tried it multiple times (saying "Lying isn't the best foundation for a relationship." technically it is possible to be honest with V from the start, he just won't believe you.) the mc is worried about whether V would harm them-- but it'd make a lot more sense if the mc was worried about how they were going to convince V of the truth so that they're left unharmed by Ronin (how V reacts could also be a thing, but the lack of mention of his inevitable disbelief is odd. it could be like "will Ronin harm me if i'm unable to convince V?") (i also think a "V won't believe me" option would make sense to be there when talking with Ronin) (the dialogue for when MC goes to get advice in VC would also change in this case, imo)

- after he says that he might be in danger if he doesn't report Ronin, the only option to click is "This is gonna be fun." in the note after, when, right before that, the MC is worried about him. 

- when he gets arrested on call, the reaction/document of the mc's feelings... doesn't quite match? like. there are police sirens and then it cuts to "Wow, that's a weight off your chest! Perhaps you can start sleeping properly again." like bro your bf just got arrested?? (also it was a bit odd how MC prioritizes discussing cut season over trying to contact V. like there's an order of priority here...)

anyway, it's not my VN!! i just wanted to let you know that the dialogue differences can be jarring at times :3 please don't murder me (sry i started this comment early last night but didn't finish it; that's why there's a days difference)