Hey, vocastar! I replayed your game because now I'm recreating it, I noticed some things I haven't before. Here's some honest feedback.
1. Grammer.
This one I don't actually know if it was on purpose, but some sentences don't have puncuation at all, but you're the creator so I don't know if you wanted it like that.
2.Point of view
I noticed at the beginning of the game, the point of view went from "Hi, my name is ___ I'm a transfer student to The Amazing Digital Academy." (Which was by the way in the thoughts) to "Thanks to your advantage, the ribbon girl manages to extend her mask forward, turning to face jax with a panicked expression on her mask." Once again, I don't know if that was on purpose.
That's it! I love your game and I hope it continues to expand in language and console! (Praying every night for a mobile version on IOS) :)
PS. do you have an image of the official ico icon file for the game so I can replase the Renpy icon??