This has been a fun ride! I'm enjoying this world you are building and I swear I can feel the heat of this desert already! But maybe that's cos I live in a tropical country--ANYWAYS! Amazing start with an equally amazing premise. I've always adored knight themed stories and you keeping our knight tall to give that impressive intimidation pleases my brain plenty!
Also, I wish to add, Layla's armor is so edgy, I am bleeding all over from being cut haha! I adore her so much! I honestly like all of them. Such a cute and exhausted family that needs a hug!
Also, yer fucking analogy with writing this chapter was hilarious OMG! This was a great start! I am so strapped in to see where this adventure will go! Already giving me a pain in my heart after that event--ugh ; w ; Poor babies!
I can't wait to read more!