This was a very enjoyable FVN. I LOVED the clues and talk with the other NPCs. Also, the clicking around the environment was very nice. It was a very good mystery and if this wasn't a time restricted game jam, I would love to see this as a more fleshed out and longer story. At the end, the pacing was a bit abrupt, but I still enjoyed it. The theme was spot on, the mechanics I haven't seen used before in an FVN setting, so I would love to see how it's coded. Additionally, the mechanics also helped a lot with keeping me interested. I found myself trying to make I didn't miss any of the clickables. The art is also very good, enjoyed Terry and Shane design wise a lot.
Overall, it was a good read! Would love to read more of your works.