Hi! Great looking game! I love the music and the atmosphere of the game. The character writing is pretty in-depth and I like how well it pairs with each character's drawing.
What is there is really good, and it's impressive how far you got in two weeks, but I also would have liked to see at least a basic finished storyline. What's there now feels more like a demo (which is fine!). Maybe there is a finished storyline, and I just took the wrong path. As it is now, it's hard to tell whether there are multiple overall paths or whether the current gameplay is linear. If there are multiple paths and some of them are more finished than others, then it might be nice to have a basic walkthrough for what choices to make to get a complete story? or maybe a hint at the end? idk
Great work though! Hope you had fun making it, because I certainly had fun playing it!
P.S. Super minor thing, and I'm sure there are more, but I thought I'd let you know you misspelled "laughing" in one of Hal's dialogues. Overall though the grammar and spelling was on point, it read very nicely.